Tuesday, May 21, 2013

Week 3 Journal Wring 2

Module 2 Writing Activity
In your journal, continue your observation list of the scene you observed for Unit 3, Journal Assignment 1 by noting several vivid action verbs. Revise some of your sentences using action verbs and/or write 2-3 new sentences with action verbs. Try not to use any of the forms of “to be” (is, are, was, etc.). Underline the action verbs in your sentences. Again, you will want to keep all of these sentences at hand as you do the peer reviewed writing at the end of the unit.

I think I made a list with enough  words in my last journal for me to use here.

1. Mat handed the napkins and his sister.
2. The little girl stared at the cake on the table, with her mouth half-opened .

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